六级高分作文及其分析

发表时间：2025-08-17

六级高分作文及其分析。

同学们，2025年6月的大学英语六级考试中，作文是检验你们英语综合能力的重要环节，其成绩对总分影响深远。六级作文不仅仅是词句的堆砌，而是语言基础、思维逻辑、知识储备与创造性表达的全面考验。以下是我们整理的《六级高分作文与分析》，供大家参考。

✪ 六级高分作文及其分析

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Dieting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)现在有越来越多人的选择节食，有的人是为了健康，但是更多的人是为了有一个苗条的身材

2)分析节食减肥可能带来的影响

3)你的建议

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明原因，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可能带来的影响，提纲第3点要求针对该现象提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因;阐述节食不当可能带来的影响;针对节食给出“我”的建议。

On Dieting

Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others, [1]especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They [2]become the leading numbers who go on a diet.

[3]However, dieting might [4]bring great negative effects on people. [3]For one thing, quite a lot of people don’t really need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting [5]not only is useless but also might damage their health. [3]For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. [3]As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition.

[6]Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. [3]In my opinion, dieting,[7]for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. [8]Only with right guidance can dieting work [9]as we expect.

[1]“尤其”，表示强调。

[2]“成为主力军”。

[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

[4]用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。

[5]“not only… but also”用于连接并列成分。

[6]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。

[7]“不管因为什么原因”，whatever意为“无论什么”。

[8]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。

[9]“像我们期望的那样”。

1.佳句：For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health.

临摹：基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活质量。

2.佳句：In my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance.

临摹：无论你的目标是什么，你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。

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3.佳句：Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect.

临摹：只有修满足够的学分，学生才能够获准毕业。

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【KEY】

1. Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality

2. Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it.

3. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation.

✪ 六级高分作文及其分析

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡

2)分析产生该现象的原因

3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议　我要高分

Credit Cards on Campus

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。

Credit Cards on Campus

In recent years, credit cards have [1]gained more popularity among college students. [2]With banks’ more focus on college market, [3]an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.

[4]The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. [5]Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, [6]which is [7]a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. [5]Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and [8]hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. [5]Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. [7]Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.

[5]As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. [5]However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. [5]Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. [9]Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.

✪ 六级高分作文及其分析

Our English teacher is a middle-aged woman. She has taught English for more than twenty years. She works very hard and has been a model teacher for many years.

She is kind to us. but she is rather strict with us. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often tells us that "practice makes perfect."

She is very good at teaching and tries hard to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English plays.

She loves us and is always ready to help us. In fact, she is not only our good teacher but also our good friend. We all respect and love her.

我们的.英语老师是一位中年妇女。她教英语二十年多了。她工作很努力，多次被评为模范教师。

她对我们很好。但她对我们很严格。她总是鼓励我们多说多读英语。她经常告诉我们，“熟能生巧。”

她很擅长教学，力图把课上得生动有趣。她经常给我们放幻灯片，教我们唱英语歌曲，帮助我们排演英语小话剧。

她爱我们，总是愿意帮助我们。事实上，她不仅是我们的好老师，也是我们的好朋友。我们都尊敬和爱戴她。

✪ 六级高分作文及其分析

The Mid-Autumn is a very important Chinese festival. It falls on the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival， everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front of the house.

On the evening there will be a big family dinner. People who work far away from their homes will try to come back for the union. After dinner， people will light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with their own toy lanterns happily.

At night the moon is usually round and bright. People can enjoy the moon while eating moon-cakes which are the special food for this festival. They can look back on the past and look forward to the future together.

中秋节是一个非常重要的中国节日。它落在了第十五天的8月。节日前几天，家里的每个人都会有助于使房子干净漂亮。在房子前面挂着灯笼。

晚上会有一个大家庭聚餐。那些离家很远的人会试图重新回到联邦。晚餐后，人们会点亮通常是红色和圆形的灯笼。孩子们会愉快地玩他们自己的玩具灯笼。

晚上，月亮通常是圆的`，明亮的。人们可以在吃月饼的同时，也能享受到中秋节的月饼。他们可以回顾过去，并期待未来一起。

✪ 六级高分作文及其分析

Only three people in my family, one is my dear mom, a dad, is my humor and a lovely me.

My father is very funny, he often tell me a lot of jokes, often made me laugh, so I very like the humorous father.

My mother is very strict to me, every time I do a wrong thing mother always criticize me. But I know mother to do it all for me, I also like me the strict mother.

I am a lively and cheerful girl, treat each thing has its own opinions and decisions, mom and dad I always criticize me carefully listen, because I know they love me, so I never angry, this is me.

This is my family, I love my father and mother, and my lovely home.

我们家只有三口人，一个是我尊敬的妈妈，一个是我幽默的爸爸，还有一个可爱的我。

我的.爸爸很搞笑，他常常会讲很多很多的笑话给我听，常常逗得我哈哈大笑，所以我很喜欢我这个幽默的爸爸。

我的妈妈对我很严厉，每次我做错一件事情的时候妈妈总会批评我。但我知道妈妈做的这一切都是为了我好，我也很喜欢我这个严厉的妈妈。

我是一个活泼开朗的小女孩，对待每一件事情都有自己的看法和决定，爸爸妈妈批评我的时候我总是细心听着，因为我知道他们爱我，所以我从来都不会生气，这就是我。

这就是我的一家，我爱我的爸爸和妈妈，还有我那可爱的家。

✪ 六级高分作文及其分析

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

命题解析

本题要求评论美国作家Napoleon Hill的一句名言：“如果你不能做伟大的事情，那就以伟大的方式做小事。”并要求举出一到两个例子支持你的观点。显而易见，本题考查做小事的重要性。

本题其实来自于2013年6月的四级真题：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

在这道四级题目中，儿子问父亲：“爸爸，我有点担心核废料的处理。”父亲回答：“如果你能到了这儿的垃圾桶，你能做任何事情。”题目为做大事之前做小事的重要性，应了一句古话：“一屋不扫，何以扫天下?”2024年6月的这道六级写作真题其实与上述四级真题一脉相承，几乎是原题重考。

写作思路指导：

本题第一段应该通过做大事和做小事的关系引出主题;

第二段可以进行举例论证，列举自己身边的'例子或社会热点例子来支持自己的观点，如雷锋、焦裕禄等等;

第三段可以进行归纳结论或提出建议措施：大部分人都没有做大事的可能性，但细心做好每件小事就是成功。

参考范文：

Success is something that many people strive for, but that not everyone among us attains. When we consider the various factors that play a role in determining whether a person is successful in life, ambition and action are wtwo of the first to come to mind. Just as American writer Napoleon Hill put it, “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ”

Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice. A young person who aspires to be a great chef might decide to buy some cookbooks, spend weekends practicing and refining his culinary techniques, or take on a part-time job at a local restaurant. On the other hand, if he simply end up spending all has spare time surfing the Internet or playing video games, neither of which would give him the skills or experience needed to succeed.

In conclusion, doing great things and doing small things are both essential in determining whether we flourish or fall behind. The former gives us the drive and direction to move forward, while the latter enables us to implement our vision and “make things happen”. In combination, they represent the winning formula that will put us firmly on the road to success.

参考译文

成功是许多人所追求的目标，但这个目标非每个人都能实现。在考虑到决定一个人是否成功的因素时，我们最先想到的两个因素世雄心与行动。正如美国作家拿破仑希尔所说：“如果你不能做伟大的事情，那就以伟大的方式做小事。”

可以给出无数的例子，但这个就足够了。一个渴望成为伟大厨师的人，或许会决定买一些烹饪书籍，或是把整个周末的时间用于改造自己的烹调技巧，亦或是在当地的一家餐馆里从事一份兼职工作。相反，如果他只是将所有的闲暇时间用于上网或玩电子游戏，这些都不能为他带来成功所需的技巧或经验。

总之，做大事和做小事都是决定我们成功与否的重要因素。前者给与我们前进的动力和方向，后者使我们能够积极主动地实现愿望。而把两种因素结合起来，才是我们走上成功之路的秘诀。

✪ 六级高分作文及其分析

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on Albert Einstein’s remark “I have no special talents, but I am only passionately curious. ” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

命题解析

本题要求评论美国科学家爱因斯坦的一句名言：“我没有特殊的才能，我只是狂热地好奇。”同时要求举出一到两个例子来支持自己的观点。显而易见，本题的主题是阐述好奇心的重要性。

写作思路指导：

本文第一段应该通过爱因斯坦的这句名言引出主题：好奇心的重要性;

第二段可以举出一到两个例子阐明自己的观点，例如爱迪生搞发明、牛顿发现万有引力、华罗庚学数学等等;

第三段可以进行归纳结论或提出建议措施：如何培养自己的好奇心。

参考范文：

Complexities of human psychology are unlimited, very complicated and often difficult to comprehend. On characteristic of human beings is seldom to be satisfied with what we have and often to want something more or something different. Just as Albert Einstein’s put it, “I have no special talents, but I am only passionately curious. ”

If there was no curiosity, we would still be living in the stone ages. Most of us are driven to do things in the most efficient way possible, which leads to experimentation and innovation. This is why we no longer use ice blocks in our refrigerators and why we drive motorized cars instead of horse drawn carriages. We have taken this proclivity to a positive extreme by investigating every aspect of the tangible and intangible world, in the name of satisfying our thirst for knowledge and understanding.

Generally speaking, most people know that they are prone to being curious with the outside world and some try harder than others to control it. How we recognize and deal with these feelings will dictate whether our outcome is constructive or destructive。

参考译文

人的心理无限复杂，复杂到往往难以理解。人的一大特性便是很少满足现状，往往想获得更多的或不一样的东西。正如阿尔伯特爱因斯坦所说：“我没有特殊的才能，我只是狂热地好奇。”

如果没有好奇心，现在的人就还会生活在石器时代。大多数人都在寻求最高效的做事方法，从而带来实验和创新。正因为如此，现在的冰箱不再用冰块制冷，现代人坐的是汽车而不是马车。为了满足对知识的`渴求，人类探索着有形和无形世界的方方面面，从而将这一天性善加利用。

总之，人们多半都有对外部世界有好奇心的倾向，只是有些人将这一倾向控制得更好罢了。人们如何认识并处理这些情绪将决定其后果是建设性的还是毁灭性的。

✪ 六级高分作文及其分析

When it comes to interpersonal relationships, it is important to show mutual understanding and respect.

It is apparent that mutual understanding and respect are crucial. Hardly can any one achieve success in his career without this. When we are in the workplace, mutual understanding and respect also should be emphasized.For example, you may have a different perspective on how a task will proceed with your college, if you understand that it is natural that people could have different perspectives because of diverse upbringing and education, quarrels could be avoided and a solution might be found. Also,if you respect one another at work, automatically you will be able to earn respect in return. And one of the biggest benefits of respecting one another in workplace is that you begin to improve relationships and a friendly and productive working environment can be created

On the basis of the analysis above, we may draw a conclusion that mutual understanding and respect really count in this competitive society. Hence ,we should learn to respect people around us.

参考译文：

相互理解与尊重在人际关系中起着非常重要的作用。

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理解与尊重的好处是显而易见的，在当下的环境中没有人可以在工作和事业中取得成功，如果缺少这种精神。比如，在工作中，对于一项工作你可能会和同事有不同的看法，但是如果你能够理解每个人由于成长过程不同，接受的教育不同，对待事物会有不同的看法，这是很自然的。如果能够相互理解和尊重，就可以避免冲突快递找到解决之道。还有一点就是你理解尊重别人，也会让别人理解尊重你。这样就能够有一个良好的.工作环境。

基于上述分析，我们可以得出结论，相互理解和尊重在竞争的社会中非常重要，因此我们需要理解和尊重身边的人。

✪ 六级高分作文及其分析

My dormitory room is on the second floor. It is small and crowded. The dark green walls andthe dirty white ceiling make the room seem dark, and thus even smaller than it is. As you walkinto the room, you are stopped short by my bed which fills half of the room. The two largewindows over the bed are hidden by heavy dark gold drapes. Against the wall on your left, pushed into a corner behind the head of the bed, is a large bookcase which is crammed withpapers , books, and knick-knacks, Wedged in between the bookcase and the wall opposite thebed is a small grey metal desk. It has a brown wooden chair which seems to fill the left end ofthe room. Stuffed under the desk is a wooden wastepaper bas ket over — flowing with paperand debris. The wall above the bookcase and desk is completely taken up with two smallposters. On the right hand of the room is a nar row closet with clothes, shoes, hats, tennisracquets, and boxes bulging out of its sliding doors. Everytime I walk out of the door, I think, "Now I know what it is like to live in a closet. "

CET6六级作文结构分析：

以文中划线部分所表示的方位来组织全文。

CET6六级作文内容分析：

本文是一篇描写文, 用“时空法”组织文章, 描写了一间学生宿舍的真实情况, 结论是“就如同住在一个大柜子里”。本文的描述可遵循文中的划线部分来领略。

CET6六级作文万能句型：

ceiling n. 天花板

stop short 挡柱

drape n. 窗帘

be crammed with 塞满了

knick-knacks n. 小玩意儿

wedged in between . . . 插在……之间

stuffed under the desk ……塞在书桌下面

overflow v. 溢出

debris n. 碎片

bulging out of its sliding doors 鼓出在滑动门外

✪ 六级高分作文及其分析

Some small things are collected delibe rately in the home in an attempt to avoid waste. Amongthese I would list string and brown paper, kept by thrifty people when a parcel has beenopened, to save buying these two requisites. However, collecting as a serious hobby is quitedifferent and has many advantages.

Firstly, it provides relaxation for leisure hours, just as looking at one's treasure is always apleasure. One does not have to go outside for amusement, since the collection is housed athome. Whatever it consists of, stamps, records, pictures, model cars, stuffed birds, toy animals, there is always something to do in connection with it, from finding the right place for the latestaddition to verifying facts in reference books. Consequently, one's knowledge expands.

Secondly, this hobby educates one not only in the chosen subject, but also in general matterswhich have some bearing on it, for instance, to meet like-minded collectors, to get advice, tocompare notes, to show off the latest find, and so on. In this way, one's circle of friends grows.

Thirdly, the hobby soon leads to travel, perhaps to a meeting in another town, possibly a tripabroad in search of rare specimen (for collectors are not confined to one country). Over theyears one may well become an authority on one's hobby and will very probably be asked togive informal talks to little gatherings and then, if successful, to larger audience. In so doingself-confidence grows, first from mastering a subject, then from being able to talk about it.

In conclusion, collecting, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a personcontented, with no time for boredom.

CET6六级作文结构分析：

·收藏是一种爱好, 不同于存放日常用品

·收藏的好处

* Relaxation and pleasure

* Enlarge one's circle of friends

* Travel and meet more people

·结论

* Use time constructively

* No boredom

CET6六级作文内容分析：

本文是一篇议论文。第一段是引子, 说明人们常常存放一些日常使用的小东西以备不时之需, 但这不是收藏。收藏是一种爱好, 甚至是一种终生爱好。以下三段分列收藏的好处, 紧扣主题, 而每一段的最后一句都写出了结果, 用了consequently ,in this way , in so doing 三个过渡词语。最后一段是一个简单的概括。学习本文应注意模仿使用不同的句式。

CET6六级作文万能句型：

deliberately ad. 故意

in an attempt to + v. 为了, 企图

string n. 线

brown paper 牛皮纸

thrifty people 节俭的人们

requisite n. 必需品

relaxa tion n. 休息, 放松

amusement n. 娱乐

be housed at home 藏在家中

stuffed birds 填鸟

toy animals 玩具动物